tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042281241132515564.post9040899165345016875..comments2008-11-24T00:01:44.587-08:00Comments on Broken Bride - A Work in Progress: Part I, continuedKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00526709522608721937noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042281241132515564.post-11035969722700522642008-11-24T00:01:00.000-08:002008-11-24T00:01:00.000-08:00I forgot to say that cigarettes and chocolate milk...I forgot to say that cigarettes and chocolate milk is the perfect song to listen to while reading that. It just goes.<BR/><BR/>pocheadImagitexthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02201304258892978562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042281241132515564.post-21545425468328634502008-11-23T23:57:00.000-08:002008-11-23T23:57:00.000-08:00I have to admit that I hadn't read it until now. ...I have to admit that I hadn't read it until now. I think it is SO cool even though I'm not that tecnicly minded. I think that the lack of love for John inhances the fact that he really wants to get her back but what happens to him if or when Sam dies? I'm also glad that I'm not the only one who mistakes I and a, not that a saw that more than once.Imagitexthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02201304258892978562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042281241132515564.post-42084883622723749272008-11-17T16:22:00.000-08:002008-11-17T16:22:00.000-08:00What happened to Sam???What happened to Sam???brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13066029069357117246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4042281241132515564.post-1197927617575274052008-11-05T16:53:00.000-08:002008-11-05T16:53:00.000-08:00Wow, Ken. This is a crazy story. I love it so far....Wow, Ken. This is a crazy story. I love it so far. My favorite words have been "uncertain trajectory." That was a good image. I think the plot is coming along fine, although I don't like your protagonist much for neglecting his son. How about getting in his head more so the reader doesn't have to hate him for that. You're off to a roaring start. It reminds me a little of that astronaut movie you recommended.brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13066029069357117246noreply@blogger.com